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Bauhaus Posterby ~megumi00

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My sad attempt at Bauhaus stuffs. It looks ripped off, I know. DX Please please please critique so I know what's wrong with it so I could fix it.

I was asking around in the family reunion about bauhaus, and mother overheard.

mother: Bauhaus? We have a book on that in the library.
me: WE HAVE A BOOK ON BAUHAUS? SINCE WHEN??
mother: Oh. Since I took up interior design back in the day.
me: DX

So I went home and found the bauhaus book and at first it didn't really help much and then I actually READ it. It was very helpful.

But most of this poster still makes no sense. DX Let us kill ortigas, coursemates.

~AryanEmissary Oct 8, 2007

it's cool man. it looks really similar to the stuff i've seen at the MoMa.

good stuff! XD

~chanbarariot Oct 7, 2007

I like!

Looks very intricate and interesting use of space.

!liberti Oct 7, 2007 Student

I like the color scheme. The word 'every' is just too far off that it breaks the sequence. Though I understand its there so that there's more balance in the composition, pwede sana gawan ng paraan to fix it. Also the text on the upper left seems out of place. It just doesnt seem like the arrangement works well. It makes the text look more like.. well.. text- than a visual element. I think this is what the project is going for? But the rest looks great. I like the intersecting trick with the letters and play with negative space.

~megumi00 Oct 7, 2007 Professional General Artist

Thank you! Shall fix! XD

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